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I marvel in the mystery of your eyes
the rapture of heaven in your thighs
the subtle contours of your face
hour upon hours my hand could trace
from the cusp of your neck
to the base of your spine
your beauty is awesome
stunning
sublime
the rapture of heaven in your thighs
the subtle contours of your face
hour upon hours my hand could trace
from the cusp of your neck
to the base of your spine
your beauty is awesome
stunning
sublime
A simple poem I wrote today... I'm sure the format is incorrect but I liked it enough to post it up on here
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If you're using free or some other modern form theory, you're fine. A poem is essentially shorter, beautiful words if you break it all down. (Or... meaningful I guess, poems can evoke a lot of emotions.) This is quite beautiful though. : o I really like it.